return2ozma@lemmy.world to News@lemmy.world · 2 days agoFormer Rep. Katie Porter launches run for California governorwww.nbcnews.comexternal-linkmessage-square101fedilinkarrow-up1499arrow-down15
arrow-up1494arrow-down1external-linkFormer Rep. Katie Porter launches run for California governorwww.nbcnews.comreturn2ozma@lemmy.world to News@lemmy.world · 2 days agomessage-square101fedilink
minus-squareNauticalNoodle@lemmy.mlcakelinkfedilinkarrow-up3arrow-down1·2 days agohmmm, seems clunky. I’m not sure that will work as a very good slogan. Do you have a shorter way of saying it without miscommunicating your overall message?
minus-squareAWistfulNihilist@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkarrow-up3·2 days agoJust take the last sentence, people will fill in the rest with their own grievances with him. Maybe his hair cut, always looks like he swam there.
hmmm, seems clunky. I’m not sure that will work as a very good slogan.
Do you have a shorter way of saying it without miscommunicating your overall message?
Just take the last sentence, people will fill in the rest with their own grievances with him. Maybe his hair cut, always looks like he swam there.